ENG 333 Communication for Science and Research

Jamie Larsen, Instructor

Career Objectives - What not to do

None of the following career objective statements is effective. These are examples of what not to do.

1. To use my acquired knowledge to eventually own my own business.

   You may have entrepreneurial desires, but I don't think you need to express these right off the bat. You are asking a potential employer to invest resources in you and you do not want to hightlight that you may leave them soon.

2. A progressively responsible position as a PROGRAMMER where education and ability have valuable application and lead to advancement.

   First, don't shout at people with all caps. Second, this is too general - most people want to "advance."

3. To work with people responsibly and creatively, helping them develop personal and professional skills.

   This really says nothing. What is this person wanting? A job as a counselor, teacher, McDonald's manager?

4. A position in international marketing which makes used of my specialization in marketing and my knowledge of foreign markets.

   Less is always best and this objective could be stated in two words - International Marketing.

5. To obtain a challenging management or related position with advancement leading to greater responsibilities in upper management.

   This person obviously wants to be the CEO. Focus on the immediate position you want. In the interview, you can discuss future aspirations.